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Postby Ida » November 13th, 2013, 9:36pm


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Postby donkeypunch » November 14th, 2013, 6:18pm

Good article.

Pretty sure you can't have six commas in one sentence.

camaraderie amongst ----makes no sense.

I can proof read future publications for a sixer of Bigfoots.

Good article though....hard to write about local blues bands. Hard to watch local blues bands. (although I saw Dive House this summer and enjoyed it)
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Postby Ida » November 15th, 2013, 10:31am

Thanks for the feedback. I'm pretty sure the editor of the newsletter reviewed my grammatical syntax, semantics, and use of commas, but again, I appreciate your critique. Maybe it should've been "among" not "amongst". If all goes according to plan, I'll be following Tommy Z.'s band and Dave Miller down to Memphis this winter for continued coverage.

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Postby hnoor0011 » January 9th, 2016, 4:58am

I can proof read future publications for a sixer of Bigfoots.
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Postby sevenyearsdown » January 11th, 2016, 11:04am

necro thread bumping!


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