Pretty sure you can't have six commas in one sentence.
camaraderie amongst ----makes no sense.
I can proof read future publications for a sixer of Bigfoots.
Good article though....hard to write about local blues bands. Hard to watch local blues bands. (although I saw Dive House this summer and enjoyed it)
"I've been told this and it's been proven by research - He who fucks Nuns will later join the Church"